When I asked for audience feedback, I was advised to change the numbers color from black to white so that it was "noticeable." I have also been playing around with positioning of the double page spread story. The little details but big details like how to wrap the text closely to the main image but keep a paragraph touch was what I was debating over. I've spent time thinking about positioning of questions and to create a repeated layout, where consistency is presented. I've also changed the tour name to "While we are young," so it creates association with the band name and could be seen as an album release name. I've added what I like to call a ripple effect along the page. This has been done with other double page spread stories to create an extra/ another intricate detail. These still adhere to the house styles color scheme. I have also changed the summary text to the color schemes blue to create consistency and so that I was still adhering to the pop genre's conventions. The color is alerting and pops out of the page so it creates another edge.
The posters looked too clumped up around the lower tier which created a less professional edge. I have taken away some of the images and aligned them. I have also added a contour to each poster. I've brought forward Liam's head and changed the mastheads color to fit the house style whilst making it vibrantly stand out. The corner exclusive covorline has only been made smaller because the bleed lines indicate a cut off point.
